Salem Senryū

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Re: Salem Senryū

Postby darnokpl » Thu Sep 27, 2012 11:26 am

staxjax wrote:Criminals track rangers
twelve walls plus braziers
Travel to homestead


Brave rangers
at night, at day
telling lies about their host nationality.


Great rangers
in punishing criminals
once was worst of them all


Righteous rangers
at night, at day
hidden inside fortress of lies
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Re: Salem Senryū

Postby darnokpl » Wed Oct 03, 2012 1:46 pm

Salem game of many freedoms,
choices and paths, but at the end
only one will matter... human nature
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Re: Salem Senryū

Postby _Gunnar » Wed Oct 03, 2012 3:06 pm

Child a showoff?
Just ignore them
Same for Midget chieftains.
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Brego wrote:***** STUPID GUNNAR!

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Re: Salem Senryū

Postby TotalyMoo » Fri Oct 12, 2012 3:11 pm

Reading forums
Why am I
Biting this cable?
I never managed to figure out something clever for my signature on Paradoxplaza, and I doubt I'll do it here either.

"ur a mod till u shwo ur a admin"
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Re: Salem Senryū

Postby Tonkyhonk » Fri Oct 12, 2012 4:21 pm

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there was a bit of misunderstanding between sacre and me and promised medals arent ready yet :twisted:
sry guys! a bit more patience please!

and thank you all for submissions! hope to see more of those <3
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Re: Salem Senryū

Postby yozzik » Mon Oct 15, 2012 2:08 pm

Six pages of haiku
Where`s the rhyme
Strange japanese
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Re: Salem Senryū

Postby Tonkyhonk » Fri Oct 19, 2012 2:14 am

yozzik wrote:Six pages of haiku
Where`s the rhyme
Strange japanese

and where is your rhyme?
no, you dont need to rhyme ~ unless you want to ~ in haiku/senryu. its just different.
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Re: Salem Senryū

Postby linklindlink » Fri Oct 26, 2012 2:37 am

i wander day and night
dreams of rivers,forests,plains and lime
never to find a home
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Re: Salem Senryū

Postby colesie » Fri Oct 26, 2012 7:01 am

Capes update
Multiworld support not released
Because Jorb
Beep Boop Bop
My builds (Under Occupation)
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Have you given haven a try? ◕‿◕
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Re: Salem Senryū

Postby alloin » Fri Oct 26, 2012 1:52 pm

here's one i found, but not written :)

Such hypocrisy
Judging me for not being you
Vanity's *****
jorb wrote:all I see is misplaced machismo and a lot of very cheap talk. ^^

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