Wanted : Obituary

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Re: Wanted : Obituary

Postby jwhitehorn » Sun Nov 11, 2012 11:47 am

Jalpha wrote:On the blustery shores of a modest lake, forever drenched in murky twilight, a result of the towering pines all around, there was a town, nondescript... Peaceful.

It happened to be that on this day I was perusing a cookbook, salivating over the new recipes I beheld. Deep in concentration I had not noticed the approach of a party of natives, their numbers and the sounds of their movement concealed by the wind in the trees and the burbling of a nearby brook.

Startled from my reverie by the horrid screech and crash of the gate behind me giving way I spun, too late, they were upon me. Whirling wildly around me, their barbaric costumes a confusing swirl of hide and bared flesh punctuated brutally by sprays of my own blood.

I ran, or tried to, a gate ahead... Shut. I opened it and expired, one arm stretched forth towards life. An odd beam of light shone down, and my soul took its joyous flight, ecstatic to be freed from the bonds of life.

R.I.P. Jalpha
Missed by his only son.


I'm more of a picture person myself.

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Re: Wanted : Obituary

Postby alloin » Wed Nov 14, 2012 4:14 am

Near the door
He paused to stand
As he tried to protect me
Off the hypocrit's hand
All went so fast
Killing blow ...
and it was past

R.I.P. Retri
only guy whom i trust now
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jorb wrote:all I see is misplaced machismo and a lot of very cheap talk. ^^

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Re: Wanted : Obituary

Postby Tonkyhonk » Wed Nov 14, 2012 11:55 am

alloin wrote:only guy who i trust now

i have no OCD, but may i correct it to "whom i trust"?
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Re: Wanted : Obituary

Postby Bait » Wed Nov 14, 2012 12:02 pm

jwhitehorn wrote:I'm more of a picture person myself.


As am I...

alloin wrote:Near the door
He paused to stand
As he tried to protect me
Off the hypocrit's hand
All went so fast
Killing blow ...
and it was past

R.I.P. Retri
only guy who i trust now


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R.I.P, good Sir.
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Re: Wanted : Obituary

Postby alloin » Wed Nov 14, 2012 2:50 pm

Tonkyhonk wrote:
alloin wrote:only guy who i trust now

i have no OCD, but may i correct it to "whom i trust"?

me no good enrgfisgh sowwy !
jorb wrote:all I see is misplaced machismo and a lot of very cheap talk. ^^

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Re: Wanted : Obituary

Postby greg0418 » Fri Nov 16, 2012 1:51 pm

alloin wrote:
Tonkyhonk wrote:
alloin wrote:only guy who i trust now

i have no OCD, but may i correct it to "whom i trust"?

me no good enrgfisgh sowwy !


Apparently neither is Tonky.

May I correct it to: "I don't have OCD..."
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Re: Wanted : Obituary

Postby Tonkyhonk » Fri Nov 16, 2012 2:55 pm

greg0418 wrote:Apparently neither is Tonky.

was it news to you? most ppl know im japanese.

@alloin,
i wasnt criticizing your english or anything, i just wanted to make sure if i should just copy-paste it or fix it. (cause i always copy-paste them and publish without letting editors check for obituaries as "players' submission".)
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Re: Wanted : Obituary

Postby greg0418 » Sat Nov 17, 2012 7:26 am

Tonkyhonk wrote:
greg0418 wrote:Apparently neither is Tonky.
was it news to you? most ppl know im japanese.



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Re: Wanted : Obituary

Postby Tonkyhonk » Sat Nov 17, 2012 11:52 am

someone seems to be a bit traumatized ¦]

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