Salem

shizuka wrote:im sorry i couldt give u my feedback about 2nd video i was busy at that time paradox. i just rewatch the video.

i think the way the video is made itself is great but not the content. its one of the worsт place ive seen to settle in, dont you see the ground in front of u? u dont need to press ctrl L to see on your map that there are 'hills' everywhere, i dont know the exact english term. flat ground is the most important thing when settling down, i dont remember u talking about it (maybe i skipped that part) but lookign at the place u chose i guess u didnt =/

to me chosing the 'perfect spot' is very personal/depends on the person, on the activites the guy will like doing withing salem etc, and a complete noob (which i believe is the guy u made the video for) will prolly not know yet what he'll do. so running 3h wihtout getting ko'ed by snake /bears or wtv, and then spending a century flattening a ground might not be the best for a newb, unless he wanna live in a 9x9 tile base

i really dont want u to take this the wrong way, as i like you and i think u really have what it takes to be a good youtuber and ur first video was pretty nice (and ur voice amazing ), but this one probably should be remade. honestly you're the first one i like the videos of on salem and i'd like to encourage u but i feel like feedback on things that could be better is important as well.

little idea : why not show simply show a big screenshot of lime pit vs clay pit (in front of you and on map graphics) picture on the video for a couple seconds? that would help more than describing it, people like images/pictures, thats would be more 'youtube like'. that way the guy takes a screenshot and will know what he's looking for exactly. ок theres the wiki but u know how people are on youtube , better make eveyrthing easier and quicker for them to the maximum, ur not gna want to make them check the wiki all the time if it'd take u about a second to show them on video, better for u, better for them.

if at some point salems community is going to be bigger we'll definetly need a good youtuber, as youtube's presence+twitch is really important in any known video game, glad u seem motivated to make a series of episods ill watch them all

why doesnt ur firned clayet helps u though? thought he was the biggest newbs lover on the server, im sure he knows ton of things about newbs and what they need help with and their first questions on the game