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Re: October Inspirational Contest

PostPosted: Thu Oct 08, 2015 3:35 am
by Reviresco
Name: Iron Maiden

Icon Description: An iron maiden torture device standing upright. The design could include an attractive female likeness to match the flavor text.

Flavor Text: The maiden's employer may be less fair than she.

Materials: 8 Bar of Pig Iron, .1L Any Blood (I guess this category doesn't exist already, judging from the wiki). A very high investment inspirational. Very heavy.

2200 Arts and Crafts
3200 Cloak and Dagger
3000 Mines and Mountains
2500 Sparks and Embers
1000 Perennial Philosophy

Inspiration required: 4900
Uses: 24

I like the idea, but not the way you did it. Instead, I'd make it a toy inspirational. 1 bar pig, 4 nails, .1L Blood. 4-5 use, crafted at an anvil. Very good poetic phrase. B- as you submitted it

Re: October Inspirational Contest

PostPosted: Thu Oct 08, 2015 5:52 am
by Kurundo
grapefruitv wrote:
Kurundo wrote:
Is it really?

Image

How do I get that?

Re: October Inspirational Contest

PostPosted: Thu Oct 08, 2015 6:25 am
by Frotted
Reviresco wrote:Name: Iron Maiden

Icon Description: An iron maiden torture device standing upright. The design could include an attractive female likeness to match the flavor text.

Flavor Text: The maiden's employer may be less fair than she.

Materials: 8 Bar of Pig Iron, .1L Any Blood (I guess this category doesn't exist already, judging from the wiki). A very high investment inspirational. Very heavy.

2200 Arts and Crafts
3200 Cloak and Dagger
3000 Mines and Mountains
2500 Sparks and Embers
1000 Perennial Philosophy

Inspiration required: 4900
Uses: 24


24 uses... need Queen-TR's blood or equivalent

Re: October Inspirational Contest

PostPosted: Thu Oct 08, 2015 3:24 pm
by Reviresco
Frotted wrote:24 uses... need Queen-TR's blood or equivalent


Well, a Lover's Locket gives 4 uses (less proficiency, but still) for 1 Pig Iron and no blood. I think it's kind of reasonable.

Re: October Inspirational Contest

PostPosted: Thu Oct 08, 2015 4:02 pm
by Kandarim
Half the entries don't seem to get that you cannot choose the inspiration required.
It is simply the sum of all given proficiencies for the inspirational.

Do none of you play this game?

Re: October Inspirational Contest

PostPosted: Thu Oct 08, 2015 4:41 pm
by Zapt13
Yea, I feel the same way. I just didn't know where to post the gripe.

Re: October Inspirational Contest

PostPosted: Thu Oct 08, 2015 5:43 pm
by Reviresco
Kandarim wrote:Half the entries don't seem to get that you cannot choose the inspiration required.
It is simply the sum of all given proficiencies for the inspirational.

Do none of you play this game?


I'm just a forum-bound algorithm.

Re: October Inspirational Contest

PostPosted: Thu Oct 08, 2015 6:03 pm
by Tulgarath
Kandarim wrote:Half the entries don't seem to get that you cannot choose the inspiration required.
It is simply the sum of all given proficiencies for the inspirational.

Do none of you play this game?


I thought they just self eliminated. ...brb going to check my math

Re: October Inspirational Contest

PostPosted: Thu Oct 08, 2015 6:57 pm
by iordanis21
1) A gust of wind
2)Stylishly drawn gust of wind caring dust and few leafs in it.
3) A sudden gust of cold wind sends chills to your bones
foretelling winter will soon end these idyllic autumn tones
4) Obtained when picking up stuff on mountains and/or if you are logged on when everbloom changes into cold snap.
5) 1 use

2830 Law & Lore
2250 Natural Philosophy
1220 Perennial Philosophy

I don't much like the name and the phrase could be a little more poetic, but I like how it happens. I would probably tweak the values as well. B, but definitely a good idea!

Re: October Inspirational Contest

PostPosted: Thu Oct 08, 2015 6:58 pm
by jakhollin
iordanis21 wrote:1) A gust of wind
2)Stylishly drawn gust of wind caring dust and few leafs in it.
3) A sudden gust of cold wind sends chills to your bones
foretelling winter will soon end these idyllic autumn tones
4) Obtained when picking up stuff on mountains and/or if you are logged on when everbloom changes into cold snap.
5) 1 use

2830 Law & Lore
2250 Natural Philosophy
1220 Perennial Philosophy


LOL how much would that item weigh?