Salem

I don't really care much about typos. Hell, this post probably has several of them. And I hate pointing them out. But this is the thread for being that guy.

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Here goes:

There is a double Quotation Mark at the begining of the quote in Iron Amalgamation.

Tasteful Gemcutting has B.C.E instead of BC. Not a big deal, I personally like BCE better, but it seems to be the only Skill with it, so I thought I'd point it out.

Mineral Sifting, has parentheses around date, again not a big deal, but is the only Skill I've seen like that. Also within the explaination text the skill refers to itself as "Gem Sifting" rather than Mineral Sifting.

Personally for the B.C.E and B.C thingy I think B.C would be more accurate to the historical period as the appellation B.C.E is fairly recent.
You should create historical accuracy thread too pistolshrimp ;p.

Argentis wrote:You should create historical accuracy thread too pistolshrimp ;p.

Don't get me started. I'm probably the only person who cringes when they get a jalapeno.

Fix'd.

Argentis wrote:You should create historical accuracy thread too pistolshrimp ;p.

like metal baskets that shoot coal balls at enemies approaching your walls?

That happened.

Heffernan wrote:like metal baskets that shoot coal balls at enemies approaching your walls?

seems legit

Heffernan wrote:

Argentis wrote:You should create historical accuracy thread too pistolshrimp ;p.

like metal baskets that shoot coal balls at enemies approaching your walls?

Real thing. We lost the technology that's all

Pistolshrimp is a pedant. Also, the skill description for Waste states, "Waste stands out as a particularly egregious assault upon the good moral character and fiber of His Majesties colonies." "Majesties" is the plural form of "Majesty" rather than the appropriate possessive, "Majesty's." Drops mic. Wait. Picks up mic. Furthermore, the description states, "Unto those unconcerned with His Majesty Waste grants the ability . . ." The lack of a comma between the introductory element "Unto those unconcerned with His Majesty" makes the sentence sound vaguely fecal, so I would recommend the following: "Unto those unconcerned with His Majesty's will, Waste grants the ability to destroy Homesteaded property." Redrops freshly broken mic.

I recommend a hat with two apostrophes on it for myself and a sharpened apostrophe for Pistolshrimp to use as a weapon.